Animals | August 14, 2021 1:03 PM | Hang Bona
Swimming elephant with gunshot wounds
This video is about creating an elephant with gunshot wounds, which happens to be swimming around in a lake prior to its treatments.
Treating ill and wounded elephants is a grand endeavor, but watching 15 minutes of prep time, and 15 minutes of seeing an elephant get jabbed in the backside with antibiotics are about as boring as a video can get.
Your opening is good, Catches attention, but then nothing else happens, I’ve watched 8 or 9 of these videos, and except for the locale, nothing changes.
You want to spark interest in what you are doing, you need to show the actual treatment, What did you physically do for the elephant (And jabbing him full of medicine isn’t what I’m talking about).
Then you need to show the elephant recovering and walking away from you after treatment.
8 or 9 videos of watching elephants get jabbed in the backside are about all I can handle.
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